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		By: Jackie Ashenden		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jackie Ashenden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 May 2010 04:59:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Kristi - thanks! You subbing soon too huh? Good luck to you too!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Angie - yeah, it&#039;s good to have an answer at last. The revs are tricky but I&#039;m going to give them a go!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kristi &#8211; thanks! You subbing soon too huh? Good luck to you too!</p>
<p>Angie &#8211; yeah, it&#8217;s good to have an answer at last. The revs are tricky but I&#8217;m going to give them a go!</p>
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		By: Angie Peters		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Angie Peters]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 May 2010 02:31:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hey Jackie - that&#039;s great news that you&#039;ve finally gotten an answer and the ed seems to have enough faith in you with regards to revising the partial :) Sounds tricky, but revisions sound like a great learning process. Best of luck!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Jackie &#8211; that&#8217;s great news that you&#8217;ve finally gotten an answer and the ed seems to have enough faith in you with regards to revising the partial 🙂 Sounds tricky, but revisions sound like a great learning process. Best of luck!</p>
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		By: Kristi		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kristi]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 May 2010 02:13:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Big, huge, extra-special congrats, jackie! This is a very big step...one I&#039;m hoping to take very soon. :) Good luck with the revisions!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Big, huge, extra-special congrats, jackie! This is a very big step&#8230;one I&#8217;m hoping to take very soon. 🙂 Good luck with the revisions!!</p>
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		By: Jackie Ashenden		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jackie Ashenden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 20:23:36 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Lorraine - thanks for waving the pompoms, lovie! Ah yes, keep what they like, ditch the rest. Easy. Lol!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Joanne - thanks for the faith! I hope I can live up to it. ah well, feeling pretty good about it this morning so maybe I can. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Caroline - yep, that&#039;s true! They&#039;re still keen. Yay!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lorraine &#8211; thanks for waving the pompoms, lovie! Ah yes, keep what they like, ditch the rest. Easy. Lol!</p>
<p>Joanne &#8211; thanks for the faith! I hope I can live up to it. ah well, feeling pretty good about it this morning so maybe I can. </p>
<p>Caroline &#8211; yep, that&#8217;s true! They&#8217;re still keen. Yay!</p>
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		By: Caroline		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Caroline]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 15:23:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[YAY!  At last!  Revisions is good.  Like everyone said you still have the editors ear - which IMHO is gold dust these days!  Caroline x]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>YAY!  At last!  Revisions is good.  Like everyone said you still have the editors ear &#8211; which IMHO is gold dust these days!  Caroline x</p>
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		By: Joanne Coles		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Joanne Coles]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 12:32:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m so glad you&#039;ve finally heard and have revisions. They may be hard work, but will ultimately be worth it. I have complete faith in you :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so glad you&#8217;ve finally heard and have revisions. They may be hard work, but will ultimately be worth it. I have complete faith in you 🙂</p>
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		By: Lorraine		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lorraine]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 12:11:54 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I know you can do it. A happy medium? Erm, make sure you don&#039;t change anything they DID like and take their suggestions, beyond that just do your thing :-)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I&#039;m cheering you on but not up to a full cheerleader dance, I&#039;ve never been any good at the splits!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know you can do it. A happy medium? Erm, make sure you don&#8217;t change anything they DID like and take their suggestions, beyond that just do your thing 🙂</p>
<p>I&#8217;m cheering you on but not up to a full cheerleader dance, I&#8217;ve never been any good at the splits!</p>
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		By: Jackie Ashenden		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jackie Ashenden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 10:22:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Lucy - hey there! yeah, it can be grim. But I&#039;ve been practising on old stories so I hope I&#039;m better at this time than I was the last. Only time will tell. Good luck with yours huh?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lucy &#8211; hey there! yeah, it can be grim. But I&#8217;ve been practising on old stories so I hope I&#8217;m better at this time than I was the last. Only time will tell. Good luck with yours huh?</p>
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		By: Lucy King		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lucy King]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 09:38:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Agh, revisions. Can sympathise, as my last two mss have had huge ones. Contemplating slashing and rewriting is grim (at least for me), but I find can be surprisingly liberating!!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Agh, revisions. Can sympathise, as my last two mss have had huge ones. Contemplating slashing and rewriting is grim (at least for me), but I find can be surprisingly liberating!!</p>
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		By: Jackie Ashenden		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jackie Ashenden]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 09:19:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Joanne - cheers m&#039;dear! Yeah, the stuff they mentioned was more to do with the setup and with making the conflict too obvious. Some of it is subtle stuff - as in the fine line between the hero being too controlling and being alpha. The heroine being strong or just being too stubborn. Grrr. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Susan - thanks to you too! Supersonic? I think that&#039;s part the problem! Hee hee. Will have to take these ones a bit slower maybe.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Joanne &#8211; cheers m&#8217;dear! Yeah, the stuff they mentioned was more to do with the setup and with making the conflict too obvious. Some of it is subtle stuff &#8211; as in the fine line between the hero being too controlling and being alpha. The heroine being strong or just being too stubborn. Grrr. </p>
<p>Susan &#8211; thanks to you too! Supersonic? I think that&#8217;s part the problem! Hee hee. Will have to take these ones a bit slower maybe.</p>
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