Comments on: My Synopsis https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/ Thu, 19 Feb 2009 19:46:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Suzanne https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-193 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 19:46:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-193 Very positive comments in your feedback – congratulations. Agree with Lucy and Lorraine about the last line.

🙂

]]> By: Lorraine https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-192 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 19:03:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-192 I agree with Lucy – that last comment is extremely promising.

Congrats 🙂

]]> By: Lucy https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-191 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 18:48:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-191 And blimey, that last line of Anna’s feedback is awesome. I reckon you must have nailed it with your last sub!

]]> By: Lucy https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-190 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 18:45:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-190 Ugh, I hate writing synopses. As I never know what’s going to happen most of it is drivel anyway. Yours, on the other hand, is great! (Thank God for unplanned pregnancies, eh 😉 – in fiction obviously.)

]]> By: Stephanie Newton https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-189 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 12:39:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-189 I love how, with every step forward in the action, you show the emotional reaction. Really good.

]]> By: Jackie Ashenden https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-188 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 05:59:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-188 Not a problem, Sri. Thanks for reading them! It’s nice to be able to share feedback and hope other people find it as useful as I did.

]]> By: Sri Pammi https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-187 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 04:00:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-187 Hi Jackie,

Thank you so much for stopping by my blog.

I understand about waiting till they put the feedback on iheartpresents. Still, thanks a lot for sharing your own thoughts,

Sri.

]]> By: Jackie Ashenden https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-186 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 01:04:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-186 Thanks Sri! I’m definitely going to post it but I didn’t want to step on M&B toes by posting it before theirs. Dunno if it makes any difference to them but, well, can’t be too careful. Anyhoo, the comment will be up on I Hearts tomorrow I’m guessing, so I’ll update my blog then.

]]> By: Sri Pammi https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-185 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 00:18:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-185 Hi Jackie,

Your synopsis was good. And it would be immensely helpful to read the editorial feedback you got and why in the end they didn’t want this story.

Thank you so much.

Sri

]]> By: Jackie Ashenden https://www.jackieashenden.com/my-synopsis/#comment-184 Wed, 18 Feb 2009 23:11:00 +0000 http://jackieashenden.com/?p=583#comment-184 Oooh, Suzanne, I am web famous (just a little bit)! Thanks for passing that along.

Well, I might post the revised chapter. Or the beginning at least which is where most of the changes were. Yes, Lucy did suggest installments. Only problem is that I’ve only written half of it! If you want, I could post the first three chapters – which is what I sent through to Anna at M&B. I don’t suppose they’ll mind since it was officially rejected.

Lorraine, I hope you didn’t mind me naming you. Liking synopsis writing is a HUGE plus in my book! You’re a synopsis star!

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