Okay, it’s official. Jackie is no longer holding back. I know, I know, I was supposed to do this months ago. But I only really managed it in one chapter and that was my contest chapter. The rest of my mss, I’ve been dicking around with but not getting anywhere, questioning every action my characters … Continue reading “No Holding Back!”
Category: tension
Wherefore Art Thou Tension?
I have just realised why I’ve been unhappy with the last third of my wip and why the black moment feels like it comes out of the blue – there is no tension. My characters are having a lovely time now they’ve fallen into bed but where is the ‘OMG it’s all going to end … Continue reading “Wherefore Art Thou Tension?”